Blaine Coleman
1 min readAug 10, 2020

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Fabrice, I understand what you're saying and agree it should've been phrased the way you say but I wouldn't call a mistake in word usage a lie. I think the author's passive voice still got the point across even though your phrasing would've been stronger.

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Blaine Coleman
Blaine Coleman

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Rel. Studies, Creative Writing… Social liberal/fiscal conservative, occasional writer- profile pic- 6-yr-old coal minor 1910-flow with the Tao, all will be well

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